I try a Midi

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• kurtalert 🤓3:59 · 2024-03-29T17:49:07.723Z

  Thanks Javie!

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• Sendhil Revuluri 🤓3:31 · 2024-03-29T23:23:05.085Z

  Thank you! I enjoyed the puzzle and especially the central entries at 13D and 20A. And always love 32D. That said, there were numerous rough spots. Happy to provide feedback if desired. Looking forward to more puzzles!

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  • Javie constructor · 2024-04-02T00:48:53.058Z

    Yes please! I don't know what to look for when tweaking and improving

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    • Sendhil Revuluri 🤓3:31 · 2024-04-02T12:36:31.984Z

      Sure! (I’ve found feedback here on Crosshare super helpful for me.) Some things that stood out:

      14A: LYCHEE is a fruit. One could argue it’s a kind or flavor of tea jelly, but not the jelly itself.

      18A: As clued, this could be Penn State; PENN is a short name for the private University of Pennsylvania in Philadelphia.

      31A: I think I get it but also think the clue and entry don’t quite agree grammatically.

      36A: I don’t get this.

      6D: I think “pokey” should be “poker”.

      23D: I don’t think this is a thing. Not cluing, but the SE fill probably needs to be redone.

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      • Javie constructor · 2024-04-06T18:21:54.746Z

        Thank you! I'm updating this puzzle, but can't find a fix of 23D fill. I'll keep this all in mind for future puzzles.

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• Iyagovos 31:07 · 2024-03-30T23:33:35.472Z

  Oof this was hard, good one!

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