Still new to this! Apologies for any clue faux pas. Please let me know if anything doesn't work out so I know for next time :) Hope this one goes well! Enjoy!
Thanks for an entertaining cryptic.
Here are a few points, not meant as criticism, but as encouragement.
2D "Visa" is a definition by example - there is no indicator, such as "for example", "maybe" or "?"
3D I hope you don't mind the advice but you could pay more attention to the surface reading; by choosing an anagrind that has some reference to "cash" the surface reading is improved; for example, "Trims cash settlement for the holiday".
Sometimes searching for a different anagram gives a good surface; for example, "Holiday displays its charms".
12A I have never heard "bud" as a synonym for marijuana. Either I have led a sheltered life or yours is far too racy!
6A "furnace shape" baffled me. Is there a better synonym for "forge"?
6D Another baffler! "Ute" is not a common term for a truck in the UK.
2D: The simple definition there is "Visa offering", would that still need a definition by example indicator?
6A is a triple definition :)
6D Mm, haha. As an Australian living in the US writing cryptics that are popular in the UK, this is definitely a cultural learning experience
merlinnimue 🤓3:17 · 2023-10-13T16:26:14.601Z
I did feel 10a was ambiguous, maybe that grammar works, I dont understand the rules of cryptics... you seem to have been constrained by the grid, I think I'd like to have a crosser to resolve any ambiguity in my puzzle (lmao me writing a puzzle? I guess I'm an optimist, cause im clearly wayyy too dumb for that)