Is it kosher to use a partial word for a definition, as you did in 5A? If not, you might want to change striptease to strip tease. Otherwise, good stuff!
Mileage varies on this, with some calling it a "lift and separate." I personally love clues of this nature (and the ? is there to acknowledge the stretchiness), as long as they're used sparingly (because they're tough!) and only if the surface itself warrants (in this case, I liked the seductive misdirect). One cryptic tenet I do agree with is that punctuation is misleading; whether you think spacing falls under that rubric is a personal decision. (In my earliest puzzles, I thought it was OK to decapitalize proper nouns under the same convention; many still object to removing a capitalized letter, since it unfairly changes the meaning, but are fine with making something look proper by capitalizing it: one of my favorite clues referenced Merle Haggard, but the "Merle" was part of the preceding wordplay, and "haggard" was the definition.)